英语写作检查，虚心学习
The first point is that the restaurant has to hear the views form the suppliers. Because the previous owners did not pay all the money to them, the suppliers will be upset with that. We know that how important to establish agreed contract with relevant stakeholders (suppliers). Develop the good and long cooperative relationships with suppliers, setting the win-win approach for the final target. No one can deny that suppliers are essential part for any food business. Equally important, the restaurant must be aware of that the Restaurant’s liquor license would be another trouble. From my perspective, Chris needs to negotiate with stakeholders (Local council inspectors & Food safety and OH&S officers), negotiating with stakeholders to develop mutually agreed policy positions. Also, negotiate with stakeholders that to develop mutually agreed implementation processes. 我的语法是弱点，还有写句子不够地道，希望大家指出问题所在，谢谢
The first point is that the restaurant has to (ask for advice from)the suppliers。(the suppliers will not be happy because the previous owner of the restaurant didn't make the full payment to all the supply) 。
We know () how important (it is)to establish agreed contract with relevant stakeholders (suppliers), (to develop )the good and long cooperative relationships with suppliers (and to set) the win-win approach for the final target。
No one can deny that suppliers are essential part (in) any food business。 (Most importantly), the restaurant must be aware () that (the liquor license of the restaurant) would be (an)another trouble。
From my perspective, Chris needs to negotiate with stakeholders (Local council inspectors & Food safety and OH&S officers), (consulting) with stakeholders to develop mutually agreed policy positions。
Also, (a negotiation with stakeholders is necessary to ) develop mutually agreed implementation processes。 。
我看到你有时候是用第一人称写的，有时候又是用第三人称写的，使我非常混淆，所以我采用第三人称修改吧！ (First of all,) the restaurant have to (understand possible negative comments) form the suppliers。
Because the previous owners (have not yet settled the outstanding with) them, suppliers were upset。 (They fully understand) how important to establish (mutual agreement) with relevant stakeholders (suppliers)。
(To d)evelop the good and long(-term) cooperative relationships with suppliers, (and to compromise) win-win (situation are both our business goal)。
(There is no doubt) that suppliers (is one of the) essential (elements) for (all kind of) business。 (Furthermore, application process for liquor license for restaurant will be troublesome)。
(For) my (own opinion), Chris has to negotiate with stakeholders (Local council inspectors & Food safety and OH&S officers) (carefully)。
(To compromise mutual) agreed policy positions(不好意思，mutually agreed policy positions这我看不懂，能不能给我中文的意思？) (and mutual accept procedures)。
要是可以的话，给我写作的背景资料，可中文版本，比较好翻译，要不然，可能达不到你的要求呢。 。
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