看下这篇英语作文可以得几分？（奖励50分）
09年考研小作文，对于白色污染问题，给报社写信提建议。这是我自己写的，如果你是阅卷老师，你会给几分。还有哪些错误需要改正。谢谢！
Dear editors,
I am a faithful reader of your newspaper and appreciate your reports of the social problems.As we know, the use of plastic bags has been restricted for many years,however,the consequence isn’t optimistic in some areas. Here are some proposals which may be practical for the limited use of plastic bags.
To begin with,plastic bags shouldn’t be offered to consumers freely in the market.In addition,only factories gradually constrain the production of plastic bags can we decrease the number of them from initial status radically.Last but not least,it is preferred that governments encourage citizens to bring cloth bags by themselves while going shopping.
Your prompt attention to my suggestions would be highly appreciated.I hope my advice could be helpful to solve the problem.
Yours sincerely
LiMing
从文字的流利来看，我会给8分。但是，如果从some proposals来看，好像你只有两个建议，所以，有些地方就显得用了些不需要用的词句。所以扣你1分。总分是7分。 Dear editors, I am a faithful reader of your newspaper and appreciate your reports of the social problems。
As we know, the use of plastic bags has been restricted for many years。 However, the result has not been optimistic in some areas。
Here are some proposals which may be practical for limiting the use of plastic bags。 To begin with,plastic bags shouldn’t be offered to consumers freely in the market。
In addition,only factories gradually constrain the production of plastic bags can we drastically reduce the number of them from current quantity of use。
Last but not the least, it is preferred that governments encourage citizens to bring cloth bags by themselves when going shopping。
Your prompt attention to my suggestions would be highly appreciated。I hope my advice is helpful to help solve the problem。
Yours sincerely LiMing 。
个人给你八点五分，总体翻译不错，但有些地方的语句是多余的
9分
英语作文顾名思义用英语的作文,除了英语表达方式正确,语言规范以外,还有一个作文的基本要求.你的作文除了有些明显的用语错误以外,突出标题的重点不够.让你给报社写信对"白色污染问题"提建议的,你的建议有几条? 提出该建议的依据在哪里? 最后结论呢? 你没写清楚,所以最后评分要看阅卷老师的自我判断了,严格的话可能你一半作文分也拿不到. 恕我直言,如有错误请原谅.
如果总分是15分的话，我觉得可以得11-13分
作文总分是15分的话能得个6-7分就不错了，没什么出彩的句子和用词，作文的得分率一般都很低的，平均分可能也就6-7分
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